Post #299

Emails from the trenches: 

I received this email from another associate, who received it and will remain nameless:

At first glance, all of the “instead of” language has to go. It’s pejorative, overbearing, meant to cast defendants in a bad light, and obviously unacceptable. Please don’t waste our time by proposing language of that tenor to us again in any future document. 

*Prophet